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[Day 7]

[Rosa has been walking with a definite limp and missing a shoe since Eva earned her rightful prize from breaking Rosa's toe. At least it was wrapped in a (strikingly blood-red) rag.]

I've been working on a song for us. I think I have a good idea.

[she'll offer her work... written on a cocktail-napkin from the bar.]

[ "It's Raining Again Today in Rokkenjima"

I loved you. Only you.
I believed in your words, soft and true.
I searched, searched all around.
But you were no where to be found.
This island's untamed forest is dark and gray.
Aah! Rokkenjima... is rainy again today.

I gifted you my heart.
And yet you had to part.
I searched for you in our secret place.
But you had vanished without a trace.
When, when will true love ever come my way?
Aah! Rokkenjima... is rainy again today.

The cold wind scatters the leafs.
The cold rain won't allow me to breathe.
The tears, the tears continue to fall.
Around my heart, I erected a wall.
There is nothing left for me, but to drink my pain away.
Aah! Rokkenjima... is rainy again today.
]

...

How about it?

[... it is heavily derivative of another well-known song.]

Date: 2017-05-13 06:18 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] how_to_succeed
Well, it's hardly original, but it will do, I think. The young people probably won't know it, in any case.

Date: 2017-05-14 02:48 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] meatitfeedson
Rosa-san is still one of the young people, you know?

Date: 2017-05-14 02:57 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] meatitfeedson
We're not old fogies, but Eva-neesan and I are twice the age of most people here, we have grown children.

Date: 2017-05-14 03:55 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] meatitfeedson
[He counts because her son would have been the same age... He might not have grown up, but she still had a baby 18 years ago!]

No, I like this one, we should run with it. Do you play an instrument, Eva-neesan? Even if you haven't touched it in twenty years, that's fine.

Date: 2017-05-14 04:17 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] meatitfeedson
That's right - if neither of you feel you can, then I don't mind, it just isn't something I'm going to excitedly volunteer for.

Date: 2017-05-14 05:05 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] meatitfeedson
It might be good for the sake of an even point distribution, if that's how this will be, to all take an extra job or two besides playing. Say if you've written the song and will do the vocals, then I could take care of costumes and Eva-neesan could come up with a plan for lighting? Or something along those lines, anyway.

Date: 2017-05-18 02:59 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] how_to_succeed
Not to imply you're not young, of course, but there are plenty of children here, aren't there?

[She probably totally did mean to imply that you're not young.]
Edited Date: 2017-05-18 03:00 am (UTC)

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